Hmm..... Interesting storyline and idea, and quite well written... I'm still not quite sure what the idea of the magic was? And what was the significance of her mother? If she could cast magic too, shouldn't she have been part of this Prophecy? Myeah anyway, very well written, if a bit disconnected in parts... ;) I liked it.
Flamenco-Frog (22-08-07)
Hmm..... Interesting storyline and idea, and quite well written... I'm still not quite sure what the idea of the magic was? And what was the significance of her mother? If she could cast magic too, shouldn't she have been part of this Prophecy? Myeah anyway, very well written, if a bit disconnected in parts... ;) I liked it.