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Personalities of the Week - Wednesday

Alisia

This is the third part of what will be seven short stories about the personification, or rather monsterification, of the days of the week. Featured in the story is Kayleigh, a slightly tragic twenty-something who lives in a ground floor flat with her cat Tuffty. Through her story we see the days of the week melt and merge through the times of the day and into each other. The idea formed when I was writing an email to a friend at about midnight on a Sunday night and thinking solemnly to myself about the fact that it was already Monday morning. Thank you for reading!

Comments

Alisia (17-07-07)

... sorry about all the spelling and gramar errors in this one - I shall change them as soon as I can figure out how to edit submissions on here!

steveoco (18-07-07)

This story keeps getting better and better. I must say that I am very intrigued about the keys and spoons...

Do you see each day as it's own creature or is time the creature evolving over the days? (Maybe it's neither)

Alisia (18-07-07)

I see them evolving into each other - but I've found that quite hard to get across in the way I wan't it too, partly because I want people to be able to imagine it partly in their own way.
Thanks for all your comments Steve, I'm glad you liked this one, wasn't sure if it had gone a little too serieal!

steveoco (18-07-07)

I think leaving something to the imagination is great. People tend to think of the most interesting things. I still want to know what caused the spoons and keys hehe, it's starting to sound like an episode of 'lost'.

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