ProgressA intergalactic private eye tracks a strange being back to earth and interrogates him. This is a draft. Looking for feedback. |
Comments
Flamenco-Frog (22-08-07)
Hmmm. Very interesting. I really liked it, especially all the dialogue, and all the tiny details you give really complete the scene. There were a few picky grammar things which could probably use tidying up, but they don't hamper the story greatly... Good job!
steveoco (02-08-07)
The details you give are enough to make this work in my head. I really enjoyed the dialog and characters. The story was also interesting. Great work!